Purification (My first Haiku)

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Open Poetry #46

Purification (My first Haiku)

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

0 posted 2010-12-14 11:46 AM

Washed in the wind's voice
Dried by the sun's warming rays
Confessed sins erased

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-12-14 01:23 PM

Excellent! In-depth with brevity.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-12-14 04:43 PM

You have made a "grande entrée" in the world of haiku with this one, dear Andrew.

Brilliant and profound.

Love,
Margherita

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01

Posts 135
Peterborough,England

3 posted 2010-12-14 08:01 PM

thank you both for your woundiful words. Im happy that I did it right.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-12-14 08:12 PM

I love Haiku and it's form although for me they seem a bit simple,
but yours is in a class by itself.

Superbly done, loved your message and choice of words.

Most excellent~

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2010-12-15 09:38 PM

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2010-12-15 09:42 PM

Love it. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2010-12-16 07:05 AM

Enjoyed this Haiku very much. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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