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Margherita
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0 posted 2010-12-13 04:40 PM



Whisper me into passion


Your voice reaches into me
even before our eyes touch.
It tingles me to the edge
of a dormant volcano,
between the lightness
of transparent skies
and the density
of rising magma.

Our synchronized heartbeats
resound in our brains
like drums in open space.
Fingertips touch
lightning starts.
Feet fall into rhythmic dance
on wet stony ground
as if on impalpable sand,
emotions twirl us
into ascending mode,
our destination the clouds,
where dreams evolve.

Hold me with your gaze
weave heartstrings
out of love drenched fibers
to maintain the connection
even if the winds blow us
into different directions.

Make life the greatest adventure
rise anew within my eyes each dawn
spice our days with laughter and joy.
When darkness wraps its cape
around my fragile wings
awaken my heart and make it sail
again upon currents of hope.

Take me to the place
that reflects the emanations of
our souls’ vastness,
where wisdom and love
dry every single tear
we might ever shed
when the longing for the stars
sends its blazing arrows
through our veins
searing the strings
of our God-given awareness.

And above all
whisper me into passion
kiss me into oblivion
sing to me of love
dance me through life
and beyond
... into the light.


*

© Copyright 2010 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-12-13 04:54 PM


ms mar...you stir such wicked images here...lovely romantica ms
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2010-12-13 06:06 PM


That was breathtakingly beautiful and excellently erotic!
Lori

JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-12-13 06:11 PM


That's what I'm talkin' about / From the very first glance / As you speak your first words to me / Give me a reason to believe / Tell me you love me / I will believe you / For I will have already seen love in your eyes
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2010-12-13 06:17 PM


You're so lovely, and your poetry is so full of grace.

Beautifully done, Margherita~

Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 2010-12-13 06:54 PM


Rise anew within my eyes each dawn.  This is not just passion but continuing love that is seeking to grow.  For love does change even if it stays the same.  A nice treat.
Martie
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6 posted 2010-12-13 09:19 PM


Margherita...The passion that lives within the spirit when blessed with another and mixed with love...yes, you baked it well.
ethome
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7 posted 2010-12-14 03:01 AM


Margherita
You lil ol lover you!
This poem is so beautifully romantic and yet it's hot as firey coals in the heart.

Good stuff, really superb!

Eric

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Saluting with misty eyes
8 posted 2010-12-14 05:29 PM


uh... yeah...

+heads for the cold showers.+

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2010-12-14 06:35 PM


I can whisper...James
Margherita
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10 posted 2010-12-15 02:02 AM


You all brought smiles with your loving comments, dear Poet friends, thank you from my heart!

Love and joy!
Margherita

Daddy Goose38
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11 posted 2010-12-15 03:13 PM


Dear Marg.
I don’t know how to use the quote function on pip, but I specially liked the lines that follow from “kiss me to oblivion.”
How reassuring it is to me that fantasy is shared, that it will not take much longer before one who feels comfortable with me may confide in me her own, and we can gloriously live it out together.  And I’ll know what her fantasy is because I got the inside scoop from Margarita.  Can it be much longer? … Can it be much longer now?  I did read it on Pip, so surely she is coming nearer and nearer.
Sends all the kissis, rubs and hugs you want. Thank you so very, very much.
Funs
Jaime

Prasad Nataraj
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12 posted 2010-12-16 06:53 AM


Highly passionate write, flow is extremely smooth too. Beautiful writing, Margherita.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Klassy Lassy
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13 posted 2010-12-16 08:25 AM


Oh, Margherita...I have read this several times in the last few days and marvel at the way the human spirit reaches for warmth and light and sends desire into such a powerful radiance.  I also marvel at your ability to capture the words, to name it and make it your own.  It is alive and lovely work, at the very least!  
Honeybunch
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14 posted 2010-12-16 01:49 PM


Dear Margherita - This is exquisite!  Romance et al - what more does one need?


Helen

Marchmadness
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15 posted 2010-12-22 05:43 AM


I have never read any other poet that does romance as well as you do, Margherita.
                                Ida

Sunshine
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16 posted 2010-12-22 07:45 AM


You, my dear friend, are a force of nature into yourself.

Merry Christmas, Margherita!


LeeJ
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17 posted 2010-12-22 03:56 PM


And above all
whisper me into passion
kiss me into oblivion
sing to me of love
dance me through life
and beyond
... into the light.
you've painted a magical love dance, and you my dear deserve every single moment...lovely...very much enjoyed....


Namyh
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18 posted 2010-12-22 06:04 PM


Margherita - We are the inheritors of an evolutionary passion that waits at the brink of extinction for someone to revive it or at the brink of eruption for someone to ignite it. The human race couldn't do without it. And sometimes all it takes to resurrect or ignite us is a whisper as your words so poetically say. Love your work M. Namyh  


latearrival
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19 posted 2010-12-25 09:06 PM


"Whisper me into passion" That line alone grabs me. You are indeed the best of the best because you use all the rigth words to softly  send a message. Thank you for your romantic soul.jo

DrinaLove
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20 posted 2010-12-26 04:00 AM


"Take me to the place
that reflects the emanations of
our souls’ vastness"

Very intriguing

Rex Allen McCoy
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21 posted 2010-12-26 08:41 AM


wonderful read ... kind of worried though, that my screen might overheat

Margherita
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22 posted 2010-12-26 06:13 PM


Thank you from my heart, dear Poet friends, for your loving and generous comments. You also brought smiles .

Love and ... passion!

Margherita

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2011-03-13 09:48 PM


WOW, girlfriend! You're one hot passion babe! This was absolutely scintillating! ~ fascinating! ~ and downright titillating! Gosh, I want what you're having!!!

I sure have missed your poetry ~ and you! I went searching for a poem of yours and found this steamy treasure! I now have a case of the vapors! Where's a man when I 'want' one! lol


Linda the very Earthy Angel

Margherita
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24 posted 2011-04-17 08:51 AM


Linda Angelo mio! Just discovered this energizing reply by you, THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I am thinking that it is time for a new love poem ... my heart is overflowing.



Love you, girl.
Margherita - dolphina

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