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Whisper me into passion
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Whisper me into passion |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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Whisper me into passion Your voice reaches into me even before our eyes touch. It tingles me to the edge of a dormant volcano, between the lightness of transparent skies and the density of rising magma. Our synchronized heartbeats resound in our brains like drums in open space. Fingertips touch lightning starts. Feet fall into rhythmic dance on wet stony ground as if on impalpable sand, emotions twirl us into ascending mode, our destination the clouds, where dreams evolve. Hold me with your gaze weave heartstrings out of love drenched fibers to maintain the connection even if the winds blow us into different directions. Make life the greatest adventure rise anew within my eyes each dawn spice our days with laughter and joy. When darkness wraps its cape around my fragile wings awaken my heart and make it sail again upon currents of hope. Take me to the place that reflects the emanations of our souls’ vastness, where wisdom and love dry every single tear we might ever shed when the longing for the stars sends its blazing arrows through our veins searing the strings of our God-given awareness. And above all whisper me into passion kiss me into oblivion sing to me of love dance me through life and beyond ... into the light. * |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...you stir such wicked images here...lovely romantica ms |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
That was breathtakingly beautiful and excellently erotic! Lori |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
That's what I'm talkin' about / From the very first glance / As you speak your first words to me / Give me a reason to believe / Tell me you love me / I will believe you / For I will have already seen love in your eyes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You're so lovely, and your poetry is so full of grace. Beautifully done, Margherita~ |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Rise anew within my eyes each dawn. This is not just passion but continuing love that is seeking to grow. For love does change even if it stays the same. A nice treat. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita...The passion that lives within the spirit when blessed with another and mixed with love...yes, you baked it well. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Margherita You lil ol lover you! This poem is so beautifully romantic and yet it's hot as firey coals in the heart. Good stuff, really superb! Eric |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
uh... yeah... +heads for the cold showers.+ Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can whisper...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You all brought smiles with your loving comments, dear Poet friends, thank you from my heart! Love and joy!  Margherita |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
Dear Marg. I don’t know how to use the quote function on pip, but I specially liked the lines that follow from “kiss me to oblivion.” How reassuring it is to me that fantasy is shared, that it will not take much longer before one who feels comfortable with me may confide in me her own, and we can gloriously live it out together. And I’ll know what her fantasy is because I got the inside scoop from Margarita. Can it be much longer? … Can it be much longer now? I did read it on Pip, so surely she is coming nearer and nearer. Sends all the kissis, rubs and hugs you want. Thank you so very, very much. Funs Jaime |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Highly passionate write, flow is extremely smooth too. Beautiful writing, Margherita. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Oh, Margherita...I have read this several times in the last few days and marvel at the way the human spirit reaches for warmth and light and sends desire into such a powerful radiance. I also marvel at your ability to capture the words, to name it and make it your own. It is alive and lovely work, at the very least!  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - This is exquisite! Romance et al - what more does one need?  Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I have never read any other poet that does romance as well as you do, Margherita. Ida |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, my dear friend, are a force of nature into yourself.  Merry Christmas, Margherita!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
And above all whisper me into passion kiss me into oblivion sing to me of love dance me through life and beyond ... into the light. you've painted a magical love dance, and you my dear deserve every single moment...lovely...very much enjoyed.... |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Margherita - We are the inheritors of an evolutionary passion that waits at the brink of extinction for someone to revive it or at the brink of eruption for someone to ignite it. The human race couldn't do without it. And sometimes all it takes to resurrect or ignite us is a whisper as your words so poetically say. Love your work M. Namyh |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Whisper me into passion" That line alone grabs me. You are indeed the best of the best because you use all the rigth words to softly send a message. Thank you for your romantic soul.jo |
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DrinaLove Junior Member
since 2010-12-23
Posts 30California |
"Take me to the place that reflects the emanations of our souls’ vastness" Very intriguing |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
wonderful read ... kind of worried though, that my screen might overheat |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you from my heart, dear Poet friends, for your loving and generous comments. You also brought smiles .Love and ... passion! Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
WOW, girlfriend! You're one hot passion babe! This was absolutely scintillating! ~ fascinating! ~ and downright titillating! Gosh, I want what you're having!!!  I sure have missed your poetry ~ and you! I went searching for a poem of yours and found this steamy treasure! I now have a case of the vapors! Where's a man when I 'want' one! lol  Linda the very Earthy Angel |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Linda Angelo mio! Just discovered this energizing reply by you, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I am thinking that it is time for a new love poem ... my heart is overflowing.  Love you, girl. Margherita - dolphina  |
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