Open Poetry #46 |
Sunshine |
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
She feels like a poem covered in pearls, lost in a meadow or ocean of furls. Taken down into soft sand by sun wind and sea, glinted by moon light protected by trees. Whistled by gypsies with dancing bare feet, laughed into good humor feeling so sweet. Listen the poem whose cadence is rich, pull thread through her daydream and take the first stitch. -------- reposted with love, for Karilea on her birthday |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Very nice birthday poem, Martie. Very nice. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Happy Birthday, Karilea. M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So lovely, dear Martie! Yes, she is a true Sunshine, our Karilea. Happy Birthday! Love and hugs to both. Margherita |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know, Sissie, how much I treasure this poem...and you've kept it a gift worth giving, not more than once! I love you for it, and I love you, for you. Thank you, Sissie... and to everyone that reads it, God bless you! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Lovely qualities the sun gives to life, and Karilea truly shines through her poetry, which is as beatiful as her heart. This poem is a gift of affection and I think it's enchanting. Karilea, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Happy Birthday indeed - Let the Sunshine in.. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful tribute, Martie, to a beautiful lady.. Happy birthday, K. I love the feel of sunshine on my shoulder,,hey, I can dream I hope you had a wonderful birthday with many more to come...and all of them spent here! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie...very cool stuff for a cool lady..she is one hot looking 39 year old. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such a lovely gift, Martie. Hope you had a Happy Day Sunshine~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you so much, my friends...but all of the credit is due to Martie...who knew me before she knew me.... and then decided to keep me, regardless. I'm a humbled woman, who revels in your poetry. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent Martie! But then that's what I've come to expect of you. She's a great poet and person and I too wish her all the best. Eric This band's won two grammys for instrumentals. You don't know how that makes me feel as the lead singer! |
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