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Open Poetry #46
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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
0 posted 2010-12-11 10:28 PM

Eyes of the stars
She shines with a glow
The sting is sharp
From cupids arrow

The sunny soft smile
That dries up the rain
Loving embrace
Witch soaks up the pain

Soothing soft voice
That charms gentile souls
This girl that I love
Has patched up my holes

Now my hearts better
She always will know
How I car for her deeply
And I love her like so
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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
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1 posted 2010-12-11 10:56 PM

I enjoyed this, kudanesh. An old-fashioned love poem.

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kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
2 posted 2010-12-11 10:58 PM

Thank you glad to hear you liked it, love is a woundiful and fun thing as long as it doesn't go south.
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