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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2010-12-08 12:53 PM


Healing in Parts


The frost on the window pane
Is just frozen condensate

When warm and cold bodies collide
While the fog opaques the glass

Then when I write "Hello" to you
Light may finally make it though



Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
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1 posted 2010-12-08 03:16 AM


"Then when I write "Hello" to you
Light may finally make it though"

I know exactly how you feel


JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-08 08:21 AM


We all have that need, Juju, to communicate our hearts desires in a meaningful and unorthodox way. To be heard. To count.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2010-12-08 09:13 AM


Well and simply put. I like this very much! Lori
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2010-12-08 11:20 AM


love your stuff lady!
Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
5 posted 2010-12-08 11:23 AM


Wow... I love this! So meaningful...

A

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