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Time ... runs all ... away
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Time ... runs all ... away |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Time ... runs all ... away Infinite stars dance in the deep midnight sky as Time runs all … runs all … away Snowflakes spin-drift in the deep Winter air as Time runs all … runs all … away tiny creatures settle in their deep forest dreams as Time runs all … runs all … away Love-memories flicker in the deep mind’s mirror as Time runs all … runs all … away --- b. e. adams (12/7/2010) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bruce - You make a good case for living fully in the moment. Enjoyed your words! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
This gave me good, cold, slow-mesmerizing chills! I loved it.  A |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Yep. I have finally gotten to an age I never ever thought I would and I understand this poem quite well. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
just contemplating deep a bit... funny what thought was really isn't so much off the surface looking back. anyways, enjoyed, -Bob |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your thoughts like dancing light. Love, Margherita |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Makes one stop and think. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing, enjoyed the winter images and ever ticking Time. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Where were you when I was struggling in my class in Buddhism? You have captured transience well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda reminds me of things around here...except for the tiny creatures which don't seem to be that tiny good writing! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Bruce...Like the repition in this and your thoughts on time. It does seem to rule, and yet, I'm not sure it exists at all. |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
There is sweet loneliness in this, a sadness that I can't quite give reason to, except to say that as I grapple for words in this very fleeting moment, time runs on, and all is swept away to make way. Elegant, a distillation of existential enigma that is both sobering and profoundly evocative. Art |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, ... and I try to catch it like fairy dust. Love this, my friend. A |
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