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JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

0 posted 2010-12-06 03:49 PM

My small country town
Summertime 'twas brown
I played like a clown
Even wore a crown
Curly mop hair mound
As I went around
I tried not to frown
To stay up, not down
My dreams were profound

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2010-12-06 04:10 PM

I bet your dreams were profound Jerry. LGR

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-12-06 04:48 PM

Ah, I though so, LGR. Thank you.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

3 posted 2010-12-06 07:18 PM

Jerry: You're better than Ezra Pound!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2010-12-06 07:23 PM

Hah! Flash, and you're a great kidder. Thanks anyway.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2010-12-06 07:37 PM

A sweetly youthful poem, Jerry...when dreams really can be profound.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

6 posted 2010-12-06 07:46 PM

Yes, I'm trying to be non-depressing these days, Martie. Thank you.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2010-12-07 02:00 AM

Feeling the positivity in these lines, way to go, Jerry. Dreaming is always a good thing to do.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

8 posted 2010-12-07 06:35 AM

Thanks Prasad.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2010-12-07 07:47 PM

I adore profound...
especially when found
in dreams.

Write on, Sir!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

10 posted 2010-12-07 08:14 PM

Thank you, sunshine, much appreciated.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

11 posted 2010-12-08 06:57 PM

This reminds me of my youth when all of my simple thoughts were profound. A nice poem that will stick with me.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

12 posted 2010-12-08 07:44 PM

Isn't that the truth, Earl? At that age everything we thought was, to us, very profound. Thank you for being here.

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