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Sunny Sunday |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Kayakers below, the TVA dam spills slow--- a sunny Sunday. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dams are impressive always ... but when they spill slow and when the sun gets out ... they seem to be very friendly towards Sunday kayakers. Well done. Love, Margherita |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
easy1: nice haiku...vivid imagery! Thanks for sharing! Al |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Vividly worded. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
You're a competent hand at the short-form, easy. I love how you have the dam spilling 'slow'... it does appear that way, from a distance! My best~ Amaryllis A pile of scribbles here: |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
How do you do this? A whole picture in three lines! I am there! Thanks and encore. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Thanks for your kind words, for what was and is merely a glimpse poem... Something somewhat similar for the historical anniversary passed a few days ago now? Splendid in two rows, the battleships docked at Pearl: Sunday morning sun. ^Originally penned with a ground onlooker's mind's eye, but could be as seen from an attacking aircraft, too. |
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