Open Poetry #46 |
Strength |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
I've found it in your smile, and your warmth; its been tested through the good, and tough times the will to never give up- to live again. lend a hand to friends, and strangers alike; cast aside hate towards mankind. the opening of the heart, the sharing of the soul that is true strength. -Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Isn't it the greatest thing to discover you have renewed hope? Nicely written as always Trina. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt: Yes, we get our sustenance and strength from opening up our soul to others--offering a helping hand whenever possible--and leaving the results up to our Higher Power. Even those that hurt us we can learn from--sometimes God tests our fortitude and forbearance to withstand negative remarks made by others about us--to see if as Christ said we can "Turn The Other Cheek". Not easy--but then again any kind of spiritual growth can be painful. Nice poem honestly expressed! Al |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I really am impressed with your style and kicker endings. LGR |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Amen. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine words of wisdom, especially like these lines. "the will to never give up- to live again." Fine writing. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I am glad I did not miss this one in my brief time away. Excellent. latearrival |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A poem that drips wisdom and insight, as if dew from a rose! Art |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
very well composed enjoyed reading your work. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sinz.. the the most comfortable leather is that which is well worn and fits the skin without regard to its own shape... you capture that fit here...enjoyed it ms |
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