Open Poetry #46 |
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Never Surrender |
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chylenedoney Junior Member
since 2010-10-14
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
V1- Day after day, I fight a war on and on forever more the dirt around me is drenched with blood my heart slows down with every thud But I can't stop, the wars not done I'll never give up until its won. Chorus- I am a soldier though I may not look it everyday I fight a battle to survive I am a soldier and I will not give up while this war still rages on V2- I throw my fist in the air with defiance My Hope grows stronger with every alliance Stay away any stupid pretender I'll stand strong and never surrender! V3- Look all you want; you'll never find me You don't look close enough to see that everything you want is before you, but you don't seem to have a clue. V4- We are in America so keep in mind close out your fear, leave it far behind. Ignore the bloody history and remember no matter what: we are all Americans We stand strong together and NEVER SURRENDER! Blackwidowgurl |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
very good work enjoyed reading your poem |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
We need a lot of this kind of attitude. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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