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chylenedoney
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since 2010-10-14
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2010-12-02 04:20 PM



V1- Day after day, I fight a war
on and on forever more
the dirt around me is drenched with blood
my heart slows down with every thud
But I can't stop, the wars not done
I'll never give up until its won.

Chorus- I am a soldier
though I may not look it
everyday I fight a battle to survive
I am a soldier
and I will not give up while this war still rages on

V2- I throw my fist in the air with defiance
My Hope grows stronger with every alliance
Stay away any stupid pretender
I'll stand strong and never surrender!

V3- Look all you want; you'll never find me
You don't look close enough to see
that everything you want is before you,
but you don't seem to have a clue.

V4- We are in America so keep in mind
close out your fear, leave it far behind.
Ignore the bloody history and remember
no matter what: we are all Americans
We stand strong together and NEVER SURRENDER!

Blackwidowgurl

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mikeandrew
Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198

1 posted 2010-12-02 04:33 PM


very good work enjoyed reading your poem

JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-02 06:42 PM


We need a lot of this kind of attitude.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

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