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Open Poetry #46

Tanka..trees and hills

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2010-12-01 09:16 PM

the bus
by the easternmost
foothills
splendor flashes
trees and hills without you
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..circa 2010/Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony;
reaching into the poet's heart
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JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-12-01 09:45 PM

When we are left alone to observe the trees and hills a great sadness overcomes us. Enjoyed, Spiros.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

2 posted 2010-12-01 11:04 PM

cant be every place all the times

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2010-12-02 05:49 AM

Fine writing, Spiros. Window seat in a bus is a fine place to be to enjoy nature’s beauty.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

[This message has been edited by Prasad Nataraj (12-02-2010 12:18 PM).]

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