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On a Bahia beach
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On a Bahia beach |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
On this beach of Bahia It is of you that I think, of the black swell of your hair, By collecting an indented shell It is your heart which I listen to, By walking in the tepid sand It is Napoleon whom I free, The sun of Bahia burns Joan of Arc And hunting English of Gironde, On this beach of Bahia It is of you that I think, I stammer Whereas waves rewrite The history of France with you. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Romantic without being too explicit. Quite elegantly stated. Ida |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I agree with Ida... a lovely tribute, here  Best~ Amaryllis A pile of scribbles here: |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You surprise me, dear Yann. There is deep involvement here, quite masterfully expressed. Love, Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Ida, Amaryllis and Margherita...Inspiration came by rememberin walking on a beach...There FRance means nothing and so History could be revisited in my own way....Inspiration is rather strange....I appreciate a lot your supportive and accurate comments. yann |
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