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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
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0 posted 2010-12-01 03:03 PM

sustenance unending relentless never to surcease,
to the decease never more to be fulfilled of needed victuals
content not to be. To life's aching pain it calls tumultuously
growling for it source unrelentingly insatiable it calls to thee.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-12-01 06:45 PM

True! Well said.


Margherita
flash
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since 2010-11-28
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2 posted 2010-12-05 01:29 PM

Yes, we the living need sustaining victuals to perpetuate the body but if for body then insatiable 2 or 3 times a day but sustenance for the SOUL..AH yes that another thing..sustenance for the soul  offers peace that passeth understanding

that's where poetry comes in..sustenance for the soul--like your poem exudes!

Al
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