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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Again you come In your silence Wearing clothes No longer yours How often Unwelcomed I have Seen your spectral figure There at the edge of my Summer green meadows In my winter forests Under the falling snow Mute with terror Of ultimate scorn You have kept your distance And yet were always near And now Here you are At the end of all Night growing darker By the hour I tell you I love you Your heart beating faster What else is there to do . |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
very nice poem thanks. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I liked the hell out of this poem and I am not sure why, because you inserted enough riddles to make this old guy dizzy trying to figure it out. Still . . . I liked the wordplay . . . . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
If you ever decide to try to help her, please make sure you have good back-up, and I mean in a worldly sense.  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Oh, I like this. Its so mysterious, and so is "she". Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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