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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
Posts 115
West Coast, USA

0 posted 2010-12-01 12:41 PM



I found this poem I had written. If I've posted it before, please disregard.

Second Chances

Daring and intrepid
you always brought people
together. I am simply
lost and my guide is gone.
Everyone deserves a second chance,
but not everyone gets one. So how
do I do it? Breath.

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-12-01 12:47 PM


Yes, we all could use a second chance but you are right, not everyone gets one. Nicely done.
Kat >^..^<

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
2 posted 2010-12-01 03:11 AM


Yes, breath in, breath out... that's the way to get through the moments. I always like to believe that, while we may not get second chances, we do happen upon new ones!

My best~
Amaryllis

A pile of scribbles here:
http://sharonleighpoetry.blogspot.com

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2010-12-01 03:12 AM


Great reasoning.
It will come along for most but don't hold that breath and adapt to receive.

Good stuff!!

Eric

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