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Open Poetry #46

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Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2010-11-30 05:23 PM

Their bodies intertwined,
his breath upon her skin,
and no, she wont give in.
She's relaxed and she's reclined,
but she's used to his kind.
This one he has to win.

Comfort and love differ.
She knows this as a fact.
Just going through the acts
wont suffice for her.
(More than) his presence should occur.
He should fill what her heart lacks.

Come on, boy, win her love.
She knows what youre made of
and she wants what you want.
It's just stamped on her heart in a less-bold font.
Get closer to her heart to read it.
Once you have, you have succeeded.

*Amber

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2010-11-30 08:02 PM

In it to win it ! Enjoyed very much!
Kat >^..^<

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2010-11-30 08:17 PM

Quite the prize and worth the effort!!! Very nice!

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

3 posted 2010-11-30 10:02 PM

I'm huffin' and puffin' and tryin', I'm tryin' Amber.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

4 posted 2010-12-05 01:11 PM

"It's just stamped on her heart in a less-bold font."

Yes, Amberzlynnc, agree...women are more subtle and sensuous and romantic and...

great poem for men to ponder--and learn the ways of feminine mystique..

Al

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2010-12-05 03:01 PM

There is much wisdom in your words, well written. LGR

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