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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-02-03 12:30 PM


    
we were those handy hands on glass walls
finger printing perhaps moments there
like scuba divers in our wishing wells
never knowing the stones with nicks

where coins were seldom wished gentle
but were forced through the willing
as wetness was their only witness
and settling to the bottom of memories

was more just the action of our collecting
placing pages back into books we had imagined
turned back again to their perpetuation
of always turning over new leaves again

yes we were those glass hands on handy walls
playful in our prayers to the preying gods
as children of the stone mouthed widows
we listened to their evening voices

and we danced most graceful in their gravel

___________

daark (dichotomy of erosion)photo by DS









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1 posted 2010-02-03 01:23 PM


  Now that was awesome!

Loved it all including the art.  You are sure the word-master.


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-02-03 01:26 PM


ms myst...thannnnnks for the sexy thumb!!
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-02-04 07:12 AM


Wow, this offering is an event of art! Incredibly mirroring picture and a poem that takes the mind into the prairies of pristine memories brilliantly rendered.

So good to see you here, dear D.!

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2010-02-04 06:06 PM


You need a bump on this - more people need to see this
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-02-04 06:50 PM


Nice...James
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2010-02-05 06:20 PM


ms mar, thanks special lady

________

ms myst...thanks for floating me to the surface again.

_________

thanks so much james...

Sunshine
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7 posted 2010-02-10 01:24 PM


yes we were those glass hands on handy walls
playful in our prayers to the preying gods

~*~

my mind changed "preying" to "prying"....
and it still made me smile.

Your photos are through thoughtful eyes...


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8 posted 2010-02-14 06:40 PM


The last lines of this are worth the price of admission... even if I'd had to collect cans to earn that price. *S*
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-02-16 11:20 AM


ms sun...thank you for the smile sided touch.

_______________

ms suthern..you always have an open account for admission to my humble spatterings..thanks lady

Angel4aKing
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10 posted 2010-09-23 11:32 AM


I am still not prepared for the affect your poetry has on me....still trying to shake the chills and get my hair to stand down lol I think I understand u here take care dark stranger ....

~~~kingsangel~~~

Eusta B. Mae
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11 posted 2010-09-23 12:20 PM


I can't believe I let this slip by the first time without comment....Loved the view from my windows, inside and out.  ebm
Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2010-09-23 04:43 PM


ms king...oh let your hair just do what it wants...scooter hair usually does yes?  thanks babe

________________

ms ebm, humble thanks lady friend

faithmairee
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13 posted 2011-01-07 04:11 PM


love both the poem and the photo...you have an abundance of talent...excellently written!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2011-01-07 04:22 PM


ms faith...thank you for your eyes and smiles
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