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You Move Me
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You Move Me |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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You stir in me A thousand echoes Of a thousand kisses And a thousand tomorrows Emotions in long decay Ever by slow degrees Never have I felt this way You move me You unlock in me So much of desire So much pain In which we conspire Memories betray innocence Ever by slow degrees Unafraid of the consequence You move me You instill in me A taste for life renewing A taste from depths Of which is my undoing Feelings long kept secret Ever by slow degrees Whatever it is, you do it You move me |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Now this is sparkling! The heart of a gentle man unfolds in your poetry, a treasure to behold for sure. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this reads like a song beautiful |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Emotions in long decay Ever by slow degrees Never have I felt this way You move me So very beautiful, my friend... |
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