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Open Poetry #46

It's ok...

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-11-29 05:36 AM

Its ok, even
if I'm lonely.

Someday I'll
make ammends
with this hate
seeded deep
within my heart
and the happiness
that will follow
will let me
feel
the warmth
through the
tough times

but for now
Its ok, even
if I'm lonely

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2010-11-29 07:25 AM

Loved it, my friend!

j.

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-11-29 11:57 AM

Sometimes it is good to be ok.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-11-29 06:35 PM

The poem does make people feel which a good poem should do.

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

4 posted 2010-11-29 08:18 PM

Wow, I've never thought of things that way.. but it does make total sense. Well-worded as well.

On a random note, I was looking through the list of birthdays and ours are the same, so happy late birthday! : )

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