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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2010-11-28 07:04 AM

Silent orchestra

Misty frosty pitches surround dawn bare pages,
Translucent tranquility holds captive branches,
Clammy resting twigs shudder in be gone nests,
Frozen moist slides through curls of brunettes,

Unwilling languid eyebrows focus downwards,
While rosy petals immerse preceding dampness,
Shinning chinrest are compassionate companions,
Delicate edges brush through creamy shoulders,

Sliver strings lesser intense flow through bridges,
Mute fine tuners bask under her dull shadows,
Maple neck, curvy arching ribs of ebony meadows,
Crafty circular twisting puzzle lanes of lost scrolls,

Her soothing fingers grip brazilwood wintry bows,
Locks rub strings intermittently with harmonic tunes,
Hourglass wavy shapes rest still along pebble holes,
Composing quiet orchestra her winter heart snows.

©Prasad.N 26th Nov 2010.
All rights reserved to Prasad.N

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2010-11-28 09:35 AM

You load your poems with imagery...
and this time the silver shone through.

I enjoyed this, my friend.

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

2 posted 2010-11-28 09:50 AM

I think someone could look at this for ages and still find hidden meaning. Wonderful write!

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2010-11-28 12:32 PM

Hello Parsad, an excellent poem with original images and a very elegant use of words...A very enjoyable read.

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2010-11-29 01:40 AM

Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Karilea. Glad you saw the same silver.

Really appreciate it my friend.

Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Rileigh. Thank you for your kind words.

Really appreciate it.

Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Yann. Glad to read your comment, happy to know you enjoyed the read. Really appreciate it.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

5 posted 2010-11-29 09:41 AM

Your imagery is amazing here. Your choice of words is flawless. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

6 posted 2010-11-30 04:08 AM

Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Trina. Thank you for your kind words. Really appreciate it.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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