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Heart held... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
to dream roses, the heart is the life of a daisy, amaranth tears and honeyed gold, plucked unwittingly, sometimes ingested white confetti taste the salt, feel it become the soul of a smile, memorize the fullness of a semi-circle, (s)he loves me, loves me not-- linger warm in arms beyond the flute of flesh and bones.... garner roses growing--glowing--in the rain, reaching for the light, yet leave me scattered as dandelions and September seeking again the kiss of sun [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (11-27-2010 11:20 PM).] |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Loved this...especially the last: "yet leave me scattered as dandelions and September seeking again the kiss of sun" I'm with you! |
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crosscountry83 Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 345 |
I love the alliteration in this! It ties everything perfectly. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very beautiful, Lassy! In the garden of life you are a rose indeed.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
KL...this is wonderful! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Martie, I have a yellow rose still blooming in my front yard. We had snow the day before Thanksgiving and there it was, big as life, like stored sunshine.The snow is gone now, but that rose is wondrously tenacious. I love your tenacity,too. Thank you for the read!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, CC83.  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Awww, Michael  A dandelion always aspires to mischief in the rose garden... are you sure? Thank you. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, Sunshine, so good to be in your company again! Hugs ~K  |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
nice poem good work. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you for reading, Mike. It's nice to meet you! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very pretty, KL. Ida |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you, Ida. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
feel it become the soul of a smile How very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hi Margherita, I appreciate your kind comment very much! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
"linger warm in arms beyond the flute of flesh and bones...." Yes. Yes, indeed. Lovely poem and it goes right along with what you commented on mine a little while ago. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I appeciate the gentle eye to my poetry. Thank you. |
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