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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2010-11-27 07:54 PM


my head hurts

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (11-27-2010 09:31 PM).]

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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2010-11-27 09:42 PM


Didn't Bill the Cat go phhhttt?

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2010-11-28 01:21 AM


Bluesy gal - some would say that it only hurts because you think it does but I ask, "How does one stop thinking that it hurts when it actually does?"  Then again, thoughts are things.     I am sorry your head hurts - but if I think about it too much mine will probably hurt as well.  Great life, yes?


Helen

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-11-28 08:42 AM


A headache is no laughing matter...

On the other hand, this work is even shorter than the claimed shortest poem:

"Adam
had 'em." (of microbes)

...which makes you the Coolidge of poets. Congratulations!

crosscountry83
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since 2009-07-30
Posts 345

4 posted 2010-11-28 09:47 AM


Congrats! : ) I hope your head feels better.
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2010-11-28 10:52 AM


Delete, delete, delete... I hate it when I do that. ...sorry.

Some people bring out the worst in me!

  You all have a Merry one and I will be back again someday.  

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
6 posted 2010-11-29 04:52 AM


come and gone, The shortest I ever read, didn't give me a headhache.

enjoyed

yann

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
7 posted 2010-11-29 07:28 AM


Ahhh...silence is all I can give...

j.

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