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Hitman612s
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since 2010-01-27
Posts 11
Illinois,

0 posted 2010-11-24 01:42 PM



”A CHANCE”


LET’S TAKE A CHANCE

NOT JUST A CHANCE AT LOVE
I MEAN A CHANCE AT LIFE
YOU AND ME TOGETHER
YOU KNOW IT FEELS RIGHT

IT’S BEEN A LONG TIME
ACTUALLY IT’S BEEN NEVER
THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL
JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER

PLEASE DON’T RUN AWAY
DON’T BE SCARED, DON’T BE SHY
I’M NOT GOING TO HURT YOU
I WON’T BE THAT GUY

TELL ME WHAT YOU’RE THINKING
I’LL MAKE ALL YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE
AND IF I EVER FAIL
I’LL MAKE IT UP TO YOU

SO WHAT DO YOU SAY?
WILL YOU GIVE IT A SHOT?
ARE YOU WILLING TO TAKE A CHANCE?
CAN YOU GIVE IT ALL YOU’VE GOT?

THEN LETS TAKE A CHANCE AT LIFE
YOUR TOUCH CAN BE MY DRUG
AND MAYBE THAT CHANCE AT LIFE
WILL TURN INTO A LIFE OF LOVE

[This message has been edited by Hitman612s (11-24-2010 02:20 PM).]

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2010-11-25 12:25 PM


Yep, take a chance, if it seems right.
Nicely written appeal Daniel!

Eric

This band's won two grammys for instrumentals. You don't know how that makes me feel as the lead singer!

Bastet
Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246

2 posted 2010-11-25 12:50 PM


I'm really touched by this modern love poem. And, yes, I agree, you have to be willing to take a chance. Well said.
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