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Duller than the Knife
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Duller than the Knife |
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gdcod3player Member
since 2009-09-13
Posts 70California |
The struggling was everything like hell The heart you broke lost its love Now baby can you make everything right? I cant look at me and tell Can you tell me what i havent done right? The light has turned our love to darkness My soul is floating alone The girl of my dreams left me alone The golden eyes you had have went dull Duller than the knife you used to cut me in half I'll keep waiting on the other side Can you give me a reason before i start my walk? I want to stroll around town looking for you Dont let my heart fall into the wrong hands You were my life You destroyed me in the blink of an eye Can you tell your eyes have created a cloud of darkness in them? The beauty they used to have is never there The ability to give me shivers is gone The girl i loved has let me fall Will i ever understand? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I don't know whether any of us ever understand completely. You've written some powerful lost love anger in this piece and I sure get the point of the write. Good work! Eric |
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