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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-11-22 09:16 PM

I wish I could
be what is
whished upon
for they do not
discriminate
who they share
their beauty with

such
pureness

their light
which shines
sometimes not
so brightly
but still
they shine
for everyone to
admire

such
honesty

Star Light
Star bright,
first star I see
tonight,
I wish I may,
I wish I might,
be like you
the star so bright.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2010-11-22 09:26 PM

You're a star in my eyes, Trina

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-11-22 09:57 PM

Thanx so much, Mr. Balladeer, Sir.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-11-22 10:29 PM

I agree with Michael, I think you're already a star bright.
Beauty in simplicity this is wonderful!

Eric

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2010-11-22 10:33 PM

Exquisitely rendered, Tina. I really have become attuned to your style. You manage to say something meaningful in each poem. That takes talent and expert analysis of the human spirit.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2010-11-22 10:58 PM

Agree with all of the above. Jo

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2010-11-22 11:42 PM

Eric, Jerry, Jo. Thanx a bunch! Appreciate it.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2010-11-23 04:18 AM

Fine writing. Selflessly giving quality of nature is quiet rare in humans however many do exists. Good wish to seek.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2010-11-23 04:56 AM

..really enjoyed your poem..especially
liked the first stanza..>>spiros

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

9 posted 2010-11-23 08:11 AM

I'm with Eric, Jerry and Jo....but you already knew that!

ebm

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

10 posted 2010-11-24 05:08 AM

Prasad, Spiros, Mae- Thanx for looking in.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

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