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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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0 posted 2010-11-22 09:16 PM


I wish I could
be what is
whished upon
for they do not
discriminate
who they share
their beauty with

such
pureness

their light
which shines
sometimes not
so brightly
but still
they shine
for everyone to
admire

such
honesty

Star Light
Star bright,
first star I see
tonight,
I wish I may,
I wish I might,
be like you
the star so bright.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2010-11-22 09:26 PM


You're a star in my eyes, Trina
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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2 posted 2010-11-22 09:57 PM


Thanx so much, Mr. Balladeer, Sir.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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3 posted 2010-11-22 10:29 PM


I agree with Michael, I think you're already a star bright.
Beauty in simplicity this is wonderful!

Eric

JerryPat
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4 posted 2010-11-22 10:33 PM


Exquisitely rendered, Tina. I really have become attuned to your style. You manage to say something meaningful in each poem. That takes talent and expert analysis of the human spirit.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

latearrival
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5 posted 2010-11-22 10:58 PM


Agree with all of the above. Jo
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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6 posted 2010-11-22 11:42 PM


Eric, Jerry, Jo. Thanx a bunch! Appreciate it.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

Prasad Nataraj
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7 posted 2010-11-23 04:18 AM


Fine writing. Selflessly giving quality of nature is quiet rare in humans however many do exists. Good wish to seek.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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8 posted 2010-11-23 04:56 AM


..really enjoyed your poem..especially
liked the first stanza..>>spiros

Eusta B. Mae
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9 posted 2010-11-23 08:11 AM


I'm with Eric, Jerry and Jo....but you already knew that!   ebm
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY
10 posted 2010-11-24 05:08 AM


Prasad, Spiros, Mae- Thanx for looking in.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

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