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Open Poetry #46

Longing for Camelot

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

0 posted 2010-11-22 08:14 PM

Camelot, oh how I long for Camelot
The water splashing soft against the shore.
soft winds blowing through the trees.
Birds are singing out with cries of love.
Your in my arms, your lips are on mine.
Gentle touches on soft places.
The love we shared,
the sweet serenity of it all.
Camelot, oh how I long for Camelot.

BugBuggy

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-11-22 09:03 PM

Beautifully rendered yearning for Camelot. Me? I'd just appreciate some cooler weather. It is the tail end of November and it was in the darn eighties today. Drat.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-11-27 03:08 PM

In a perfect world, I wish.

Very lovely capture of a time and place.

mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

3 posted 2010-11-27 11:40 PM

very nice poem.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2010-11-27 11:51 PM

Beautifully romantic Bug!

Great scene and feel.

Eric

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