Slammer Dogs (Hexsonneta from the Poetry Workshop)

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Open Poetry #46

Slammer Dogs (Hexsonneta from the Poetry Workshop)

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2010-11-18 11:19 PM

Slammer Dogs

My Abby is not bright
I found her in the pound
A picked up run-around
She flirted late at night
And danced with dog delight
… but not with any hound.

Now Stuart’s very smart
He tried to jump his bail
(it shocked him when he failed)
But, Abby stole his heart
And they will never part
That girl sure hooked her male.

Those puppies are all right
In fact, they’re dynamite!

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Alison

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

1 posted 2010-11-19 02:24 AM

Fine write, Alison. Reminds me to visit the poetry workshop again.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2010-11-19 03:56 AM

Heh he Alison you're quite the character.....I love that "Slammer Dogs"!

The age old story, from Percy Sledge, "When A Man Loves A Woman" Well, there's just no cure and nothing he can do.

This is just perfect Alison. From the Canine personalities right through.

Eric

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2010-11-19 06:46 AM

ok you two,,.get a kennel will ya? enjoyed your sexsonneta ms ali-san..

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

4 posted 2010-11-19 09:43 AM

I echo DS, a private kennel at that.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-11-19 09:55 AM

Oh for heaven's sake look who are sounding prudish! Great write! I like your doggie style. ebm

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2010-11-20 05:56 PM

Cute!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2010-11-22 02:00 PM

This is so cute, Alison. Love your style and humor.
Ida

crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

8 posted 2010-11-26 12:52 PM

It's amazing how you mix form with meaning <3

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