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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
 ~ lost ~ in the covered pool of resort closed for winter lost mallard ducks swim |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
but they have each other... one might consider this as found enjoyed it ms |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cool, my friend... j |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
One thing about it, they won't have to share or fight over the food they find. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very interesting. Love the picture it makes for greater past meaning. Eric |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Dark Shadow, If you look at it that way, I guess they aren't lost!!  Thanks!ooxx |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
jwesley, thank you. Yes, I suppose they are quite cool! Thank you ... ooxx |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
JerryPat, they only have to share with each other. And since they are male and female, I'm sure they will!! Thank you for commenting. ooxx |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Eric, great comment! Thank you ... ooxx |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Lovely Haiku and a pleasant serene romantic photo. They sure seem to be lost. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful. I see that he is the leader exploring the path for her who follows trusting him, they have got possibilities surely. Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I guess they couldn't duck away for warmer climates - sorry, couldn't resist. Happy Thanksgiving, Marti. Alison |
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