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Fallow reflections |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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Fallow reflections Variable ooze patches of minute glowing cobalt, Peeping through midnight tan of cold fine russet, Longing strikes of taupe merge with pale umber, Disappearing citrine’s graceful ancient wishful smiles, Waving extensive auburn juggles with swift gust, Radiating tender skin, warm quality of self luminous, Searching captive vision over lemon honey lips, Narrow folding frills glide through humble bulge, Modest curvy rufous silky folds brush dampness, Clutching fabric, revealing those long golden ferns, While aloof fingers extending muscular embrace, Startling those silent mysterious pearly neighs, Locks knit million magical tales on desert sand, Invisible disturbing ripples on silvery pebble hoofs, Sturdy twisting point resting between placid eyes, Fallow reflections flow towards the unicorn queen. ©Prasad.N 15th Nov 2010. All rights reserved to Prasad.N |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wow, so much texture, color and image here, Prasad!  Best~ Amaryllis |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I agree with the commenter who mentioned texture. This is lovely. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
prasad, a pleasure to look through this window |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree, wonderful images abound in this piece and all flow so nicely. Great work! Eric |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Amaryllis. Glad you see the textures and images. Really appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Kaoru. Thank you for your lovely comment. Really appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Dark. Pleasure to read your comments. Really appreciate it.Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Eric. Glad you see those wonderful images too. Really appreciate it.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love the many layers of this, Prasad. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, Ida. Glad to read your comments. Really appreciate it."Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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2gabby Junior Member
since 2010-11-21
Posts 23 |
lovely... the texture and colors are so vivid in my mind |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, James. Glad to read your kind words. Really appreciate it. Thank you for taking time to read and commenting, 2gabby. Welcome to PIP, happy these words bring vivid images. Really appreciate it. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It seems that in the reading, my friend, that I float between the edges of water and night skies... and feel the warm of it all.  |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you for taking time to read and commenting,Karilea. Glad to read your kind words. Really appreciate it.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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