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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-11-15 02:26 PM


she met my eyes with her own there
as if I were not really welcome
but the sign said walk ins were
so she had to admit it, and admit me

the blush was honesty across her face
as she glanced down there and recognized
what my hand was surrounding proudly
fully exposed but in public view slightly

as she looked around to the other eyes
and then hurried me to her chair quietly
to drap my offering with a silky apron
and hope my bulge wasn't too revealing

I can't believe you would do that
she whispered as she clipped so quickly
to get me in and out of her influence
before anyone else became a witness

and then glancing down again she smiled
and said something hard and salty
was also a craving she had just realized
and would I mind sharing mine with her

to which I questioned slyly,  peanuts envy?

______________

daark

(scribblenote...stopped at 7-11 and picked up a can of roasted peanuts before stopping in at stylecuts for a haircut at lunch time...the events are listed above..

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-15-2010 05:46 PM).]

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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-11-15 06:14 PM


Oh jeez! Clever.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Amaryllis
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2 posted 2010-11-15 06:16 PM


Lol Dark!  

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Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-11-16 06:45 AM


thanks JP..

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a'mary..yep can see that happening, thanks lady

Earl Brinkman
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4 posted 2010-11-16 09:02 AM


I`m blushing but grinning.
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-11-16 10:34 AM


thanks eb...the blush looks good on ya!!
Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-11-16 01:13 PM


Clever write this, Dark. Explanation on the event brought me to my right senses.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-11-16 01:23 PM


Prasad...thanks guy !
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8 posted 2010-11-16 02:29 PM


ROFLMAO...and here last night I was snacking on peanuts...

you're SO wicked!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-11-16 02:39 PM


ms sun..they are hard to resist huh...lol
thanks lady!

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10 posted 2010-11-17 12:53 PM


I have been snacking on them too.  No kidding!!! God, you get me laughing.

A

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2010-11-17 06:50 AM


ms ali-san, I do enjoy your laughter, thanks babe
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