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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2010-11-15 04:15 AM



A thought can change the world you know
Like planting a seed and watching it grow
For better or worse?
Watch it grow and you'll know
Whether weed or rose...

A thought can change your world you know
Just plant a seed and you’ll see
A thought can change your world you know
Good or evil? For you and me…

A thought can change the world you know

As the seed

Grows

And grows

And grows...

So I’ll remember to catch
What you drop the next time that
You drop a thought my way
See my soil is rich
And these seeds grow thick
Penetrating roots

That…

Grow …

And grow…

And grow…

So bring on the rain now

And wash away…

The evil thoughts

That are

Thrown my way…

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (11-15-2010 04:46 AM).]

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-11-16 07:18 PM


Your thoughts are wise and very beautifully expressed.

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-11-16 09:00 PM


Wise words indeed.  Thanks for an interesting read.
Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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3 posted 2010-11-16 09:38 PM


Nicely said, Angel. Your words fertilize my mind..
Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
4 posted 2010-11-16 10:58 PM


Indeed, so very true! Everyone should read this.  

~Amaryllis

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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5 posted 2010-11-21 09:09 PM


Nice...James
2gabby
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6 posted 2010-11-21 09:52 PM


love the wordplay here. nicely done.
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