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| Open Poetry #46 |
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Good Morning Everyone |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Good Morning Good morning restless choir songs, Invading passages their scores, Fire and ice fray head strong, The traveler's place unsure, Bold actors chant self serving, Impromptu at the door. Good morning lights encroaching, icy fingers stab the glass. Sleek swords of light in motion, cutting shadows on the sash. The looking glass creeps open, enticing golden bowls to act. Good morning clocks keep seeking the conscious thoughts to flow. Dream sailors are retreating Eldorado's shores of gold. A mirage of goals conceding the slumbering lids unfold. Good Morning! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You sound like quite the dreamer, Eric!! Love the images of that second stanza, especially...well done  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! Awakening with this poems persuasion is like opening your eyes to more wonders than you can comprehend at first drowsy glance. By the time you get to the last verse all becomes clear. Good writing. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The first stanza is exactly how a minstrel might see his world. Excellent writing, Eric. I truly enjoyed this. Thank you! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he literally yes, I guess you could say that Michael. Thanks for dropping in and reading this.....Comments much appreciated. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jerry Every day is full of glorious wonders of some sort. Thanks for the read and the recognition of the last verse to tie it all in. Eric |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...Good Morning. Wake me to very impressed ! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love it, ethome! Better than waking up and smelling the coffee. Great poem and visuals, and light fantastic words at play!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Good morning my friend! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you oh Sunshine one for the minstrel comment and the writing comment.. Youse is a great gal there's no mistaking that!! Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Martie my love I'm so glad I woke you to being impressed......Have a great day! Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed this! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Blues for the comments. I loved doing it so I could greet the day with poetry. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good morning to you too PS Eric |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Wonderful painting through magical words Eric. Fine write.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Good morning indeed! Thank you for the sunrise inspiration. ebm |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh so very, very beautiful, Eric! I am impressed by this... the closure is divine... well, the whole thing is  My best~ Amaryllis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Helen Glad you enjoyed. Eric Prasad I appreciate that comment. Have a nice day. Eric |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you EBM I appreciate the visit and the fine comment. Eric Amaryllis That's very nice of you to say and I appreciate it so much....Many thanks Eric |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Morning or mid-day - Still an excellent write... Nicely done, Eric.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hi Nan Long time no communicate. Good to hear from you and thanks for the kind words. Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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