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Open Poetry #46

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Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-11-11 03:49 PM

She looked at him with those eyes,
Those illustrious Òoh myÓ, those falling knives,
Just along Gastbury Street,
Where the pianos play along the riverside

Where the trees never seem to know which season it is,
Just like the room to your front yard,
Where ones dog runs along the grass,
The pigeons pass just as summer talks under the breath of PenelopeÕs voice,

That sweet, Òoh myÓ, oh for the thin walls,
Where the jealous seasons pass and fall
Fathers call and mothers ball,
Here and there, winter sees,

I love this feeling,
This street along the riverside.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

1 posted 2010-11-11 05:32 PM

Lovely! So well-written
.
~A

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2010-11-12 10:18 PM

Oh yea, so glad to read this.
Great scenery and choice of words.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2010-11-15 07:15 PM

Thanks A and Blues, always happy to see you two around.

Cheers

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