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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Paper bag with gun, thrush's tail---songbirds happy at the water bowl! When I was younger she laid back upon a rock, before hard cold moons. Winter chrysalis--- I remember the Spring warmth: flowers, promises. A hart leaps across the path in front of me, and November makes sense. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, I love Haiku, and you've done 4  Enjoyed.-Trina. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
November cold days Befitting what's in your heart Take time to know self . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very cool and crisp, easy1. Much enjoyed these little slices of life. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I've never been very good at these but you're very good......Love the economy of words with such meaning......I guess I'm just too much of a yap-a-long Cassidy. Great stuff! Eric |
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