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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-11-09 10:01 AM


stream of quicksilver down
to river width polishing stones
hilted at sunset horizon

willow whispering night sheath
gasping welcome to her womb
whose sides know no edge

lava dawn before reddened sun
liquid soul kneading heart shins
bedizened by those mortal dances

one wonders how her edge causes tides

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daark


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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
1 posted 2010-11-09 10:14 AM


Aaaa so so sublime... loved this, Mr. D~!  Beautiful.
~A

JerryPat
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2 posted 2010-11-09 10:23 AM


Taking dark into unseen worlds.
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-11-09 10:28 AM


a'mary..thanks ms

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jp, thanks guy, just a visit to a sword maker's workshop

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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4 posted 2010-11-09 10:59 AM


Wonderful! I like it. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2010-11-09 11:28 AM


thanks ms sinz..
Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2010-11-09 01:10 PM


Fine images and fine writing, Dark.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-11-09 05:00 PM


thank you prasad
naturegirl
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8 posted 2010-11-09 06:01 PM


a japanese swordsmith? now that would be a fascinating experience. enjoyed this.
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-11-09 09:28 PM


naturegirl..aye it is a special blessing to be close to his masterpieces...thanks lady friend
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