Open Poetry #46 |
shin moon katana |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
stream of quicksilver down to river width polishing stones hilted at sunset horizon willow whispering night sheath gasping welcome to her womb whose sides know no edge lava dawn before reddened sun liquid soul kneading heart shins bedizened by those mortal dances one wonders how her edge causes tides ___________ daark |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Aaaa so so sublime... loved this, Mr. D~! Beautiful. ~A |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Taking dark into unseen worlds. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
a'mary..thanks ms ______________ jp, thanks guy, just a visit to a sword maker's workshop |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Wonderful! I like it. Enjoyed this. -Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks ms sinz.. |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine images and fine writing, Dark. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thank you prasad |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
a japanese swordsmith? now that would be a fascinating experience. enjoyed this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
naturegirl..aye it is a special blessing to be close to his masterpieces...thanks lady friend |
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