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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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Ungraceful and clamoring over one another they trip from the tongue clumsy and honest With no forethought beyond the truth the blessed, unfettered truth Pristine and refreshing like fresh water on cracked and thirsty lips Deperate ears perked and offended sift through the results seeking only what ruffles the savage breast no more no less Sacrifice to save face openning enough to ensure it closes tight Silencing the echoes that invade the lull stir the dust to cover the tracks Unabashedly informing keep your water keep your words This is no place for liberation If I don't say it...who will? |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I like this. ebm |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sacrifice to save face openning enough to ensure it closes tight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I like this too, very much. What I got was a struggle with self control so as not to allow a certain soomeone to bring you down to their level. good poem, good venting. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amazing how that little wagging item can cause so much trouble. You're right on with this one and I hope that gum doesn't burst and put your eyes out so you aren't able to write some more of this social mediating.....Well done! Eric |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such descriptive about power of words and ideas...Thanks for the very enjoyable read. regards yann |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thanks everyone for reading and commenting. I really do appreciate it. Aenea If I don't say it...who will? |
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