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Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-11-03 08:38 AM

Lonely tears
welling within
my eyesolation
For
little is
of little consolation
when
they
fall…

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

1 posted 2010-11-03 10:44 AM

I agree. Tears do not console, they are there to be consoled.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-11-03 10:47 AM

JerryPat- thanks for the eyes and understanding. ebm

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-11-03 12:19 PM

Well, I do like them in some cases especially after losing a loved one.....It's a grief release.
However, I know where you're coming from and this says it well.

Eric

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-11-03 12:29 PM

lonely doeasn't mena alone...and it certainly can leave you eyesolated...

concise, with a nice play on words, that conveys the emotion well....

consolation...many forms of that I suppose, and sometimes nothing consoles

nicely done ma'am, as I have come to expect from you

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

5 posted 2010-11-03 12:57 PM

Eric, yes there are many kinds of tears it is true. I'm an easy weeper so I think I have met them all. ebm
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Cpat, you are too kind, thank you for your words. ebm

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

6 posted 2010-11-03 04:10 PM

ebm - just when you think you've met them all some more will come along. Blessing or curse? Enjoyed your words.

Helen

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-11-03 04:15 PM

Helen, Good question...I know I curse when I cry at cartoons LOL! ebm

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2010-11-03 06:49 PM

Ah, tears. Perhaps the heart's form of words. Enjoyed this.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

9 posted 2010-11-04 08:24 AM

Trina- "tears. Perhaps the heart's form of words"
that sounds like the seed of a poem to me...I like to see you expand on that thought. ebm

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