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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Constellate for maybe time never forgets stars can be a sad love story scattered in a stirring of dust but it is my lullaby just for one across a blue suede night when you look at the moon do you see the same one for time never forgets "I'm so hard to handle |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear 1slick_lady, There's a lovely thought here Hon, and I like it a lot. Love Bobby |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The ethereal feeling of love portrayed here. Beautiful |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous and a touch of sad love it |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - you always express your thoughts in your writings, such as this one... BC |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely thought, Helen. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"when you look at the moon do you see the same one" Hey, that's always been MY smile, not that glowing imposter's!!! Loved the write... j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The moon is one of the most powerful love energy meeting points, I think. Beautifully melancholic, dear Helen. Love, Margherita |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
stars can be a sad love story I really enjoyed this. Its a beautiful thought well versed. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Helen, we must be looking at the same moon right now, because its trying to reflect all of your radiance to the heavens, but even the moon can't shine that bright. Lovely to read you again. Happy Valentines Day.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i have wondered that wonder too about synchronized sunsets, does the desired one see the colors in my eyes |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But we can forget time... and hear a song of hope from stars that once shared sadness. *S* And I can get lost in your words. *S* |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you sing a sad and lovely moon song Helen timeless |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
It's got a Tom Waits beauty of the blues kinda feel. I like. poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
somehow I think we all see the same moon.... but our eyes and heart often wonder if the same thoughts are remembered... we are shaped by what we feel.... well done ma'am.. |
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