Open Poetry #46 |
Thoughts During A Payroll Meeting |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Mist at the base Of autumn mountains Ripples over colored pebbles In a shallow stream A beautiful woman Gazes over her naked shoulder A wise man Enjoys the pleasures of his own wonder— And listens to the sparrows sing . |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh how your mind wandered so beautifully.. Great stuff! Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice thoughts..anytime.. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I've enjoyed many boring meetings this way. Ida |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
great imagination |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful woman, a wise man, and a good dog all that needed in life |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Very pretty mind wandering poem~ |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
"...whilst the great ocean of truth lay all undiscovered before me." (Isaac Newton) |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! Thoughts sure beat the hell out of that dreary payroll meeting, huh? . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Works for me! "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Great poetic flow like a river at eventide..oh how the mind meanders into lovely tributaries of thought and feelings even in the midst of quotidian commonplace events.. Wonderful! Al |
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