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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-10-29 12:02 PM


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Mist at the base
Of autumn mountains

Ripples over colored pebbles
In a shallow stream

A beautiful woman
Gazes over her naked shoulder

A wise man
Enjoys the pleasures of his own wonder—
And listens to the sparrows sing


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ethome
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1 posted 2010-10-29 12:32 PM


Oh how your mind wandered so beautifully..

Great stuff!

Eric

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-10-30 09:02 AM


nice thoughts..anytime..


Marchmadness
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3 posted 2010-10-30 12:39 PM


I've enjoyed many boring meetings this way.
                                 Ida

Prasad Nataraj
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4 posted 2010-10-31 01:59 AM


fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

ramisf
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5 posted 2010-10-31 02:06 AM


great imagination
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2010-10-31 02:45 AM


a beautiful woman, a wise man, and a good dog

all that needed in life

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2010-10-31 11:21 PM


Very pretty mind wandering poem~
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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8 posted 2010-11-01 04:10 AM


"...whilst the great ocean of truth lay all undiscovered before me."
(Isaac Newton)

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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9 posted 2010-11-03 06:43 PM


Hah! Thoughts sure beat the hell out of that dreary payroll meeting, huh?

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2010-11-07 08:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
Andrew Scott
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11 posted 2010-11-07 08:58 PM


Works for me!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

flash
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miami beach, florida
12 posted 2010-12-06 06:33 AM


Great poetic flow like a river at eventide..oh how the mind meanders into lovely tributaries of thought and feelings even in the midst of quotidian commonplace events..

Wonderful!

Al

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