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Open Poetry #46

Chains and Things

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-10-24 10:31 AM

Chains and Things

She took small steps.
The soft October moonlight
Beamed through the blinds
Creating a black and white
Slide show on her naked body.

Outside,
the gentle breeze
Rustles fall leaves
Around the deck

Quietly,
And with the grace
Of a dancer that she was,
She slid her long body
Next to mine.

Her dark skin,
Standing in stark contrast
To my clean white sheets,
Moved against mine with
A need that couldn’t be denied.

Us together broke rules.
Us together knew none.

On a cool fall evening
The moonlight smiled
On two people.

Two sets of arms reaching out.
Two hearts sharing
Two lonely people finding
In the ecstasy of the union,
A haven from the differences
This world would chain them with.

Zeitgeist

[This message has been edited by Zeigeist (10-25-2010 05:05 PM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-25 12:25 PM

I'm surprised no one has commented on this...
you address in a sensual and tender way how differences can be overcome and how the chains of "convention" are not always enough to keep us from finding refuge with someone who shares...

enjoyed!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2010-10-25 12:51 PM

I love how sensual this is. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Zeigeist
Member

since 2009-12-09

Posts 311
Michigan

3 posted 2010-10-27 07:03 PM

Thank you both for your replies to this poem.

Zeitgeist.

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