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Bad Dream
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Bad Dream |
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rvall New Member
since 2010-10-21
Posts 8 |
I know its her It has to be her I used to be close Close as anyone can get, Inside Her eyes aren’t there Our heart was never there I was led to love Love was imagination, For us She looks the same Her walk is the same I felt her in dream Dream, the only place we speak, We kiss Was it real? Is she even real? I felt her in dream Dream, the only place we love, We meet |
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rebelrea Junior Member
since 2010-10-22
Posts 20Michigan, USA |
Loved it,, if this is actually whats happening to you, I know exactly how you feel. Except from a girls perspecitve. And I know it sucks |
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rvall New Member
since 2010-10-21
Posts 8 |
This was written a long time ago. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I imagine a man or two could write something like this about me...funny how time makes things seem like a dream |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Your poem is great and sad. But it seems that bad dream has passed and I hope your having a good dream now.  |
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