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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
My soul aches to breathe The air of poet's mind Inhaling kindred winds Of heart felts shared Exhaling gratitudes For reading and being read Holding my breath now Waiting for what will never be In the tainted air here Gasping in love and security [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-25-2010 03:12 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I feel the same way at times the last verse hit home for sure |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
passing shadows- so glad you can relate but I'm sorry it is the second verse though... hugs! Eusta [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-25-2010 03:12 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you portray ( or seem to ) a dichotomy of thoughts.... your soul in one place and perhaps you in another... to yearn for something is human, to find it..extraordinary... enjoyed your words here ma'am, and think you captured something a lot feel or have felt. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
My body is in a compromised position where I can't write openly here. What I do here is on the down low. shhhhh. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you do a great job on the down low. not a word will be whispered. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Hey Lady! Thanks for being all cool about it. Glad you like what I'm doing. ebm |
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