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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-10-19 04:03 PM


Spring
is gone
your color did fade
your beauty is  tainted
and as the wind
plucks you
from the very thing
that gave you life
you're sent into
a spiraling descent
a beautifully graceful
Fall

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-10-19 04:09 PM


I like it!ebm
katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
2 posted 2010-10-19 07:20 PM


NICE!!
Kat >^..^<

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2010-10-19 07:45 PM


You captured it, and made it beautiful.

So nice~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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4 posted 2010-10-20 07:48 AM


EBM, Kat, Blues - Thanx for stopping by, I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2010-10-24 11:20 PM


A pleasure to read...James
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2010-10-25 08:21 AM


fantastic!
Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2010-10-25 11:53 AM


what a great metaphor for relationships...and for their ending, along with of course a nice desciption of the change of season..

enjoyed ma'am

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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8 posted 2010-10-29 11:21 AM


James, Shadows, Cpat. - Thanx for looking in.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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