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Open Poetry #46

Fall...

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-10-19 04:03 PM

Spring
is gone
your color did fade
your beauty is tainted
and as the wind
plucks you
from the very thing
that gave you life
you're sent into
a spiraling descent
a beautifully graceful
Fall

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-10-19 04:09 PM

I like it!ebm

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

2 posted 2010-10-19 07:20 PM

NICE!!
Kat >^..^<

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2010-10-19 07:45 PM

You captured it, and made it beautiful.

So nice~

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2010-10-20 07:48 AM

EBM, Kat, Blues - Thanx for stopping by, I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2010-10-24 11:20 PM

A pleasure to read...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2010-10-25 08:21 AM

fantastic!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2010-10-25 11:53 AM

what a great metaphor for relationships...and for their ending, along with of course a nice desciption of the change of season..

enjoyed ma'am

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

8 posted 2010-10-29 11:21 AM

James, Shadows, Cpat. - Thanx for looking in.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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