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Beware of Falling Rocks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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These monstrous vague inanities pomposities madden me assumptions with conclusions wrong through abject shoulders in shrug's assent I see how you might think that but no allow me one moment with your grease pen and a glass I'll show you--here-- right here, this one? should wear brackets then the sum squared reduce before you multiply and lean into the gradient strke through your errors with vigor lest you forget what you have learned was wrong so let's just leave it there like bones in fetal clutch of graves with stones in random eloquence oh do not scream in Dante's cave honor them, the numbers, scored - the witless dead discovered gold while digging for the sun. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You never fail to amaze me... especially when in pain.  |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I did not know there was an actual Dante's Cave, a karst cave in Slovenia... but now I do, thanks! This reader has been a bit remiss in the mathematics department at times, but I get the gist of the last few lines here. Very well put, indeed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm in a mood now that certain mood that I can't really put a word to thanks and |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
I love the energy of your poems. ebm |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh Celeste Celeste, If pie are square then how many more pieces can you get in comparison to pie are round??? Great angry sadness in this my dear. Love the trail off into the accomplishments of the witless dead......Not everyone can claim that. Love your stuff!! Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
LOve to read you.. whether it is anger, fear, love, frustration, or spinning a tale ma'am... I am always impressed and always moved by what I read from your pen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to those who were undaunted by the mathy language--the stuff gives me the shudders too. I DID once get an A in math, though, not because I was good at it, but because I could translate for the teacher. (He wasn't foreign, he was gay.  I didn't think that interfered with his ability to teach math and was vocal to the class about that.)He made me his little assistant, though, because I had a pretty good comraderie with my peers that year, and he overheard me once telling one of them to stop looking at the whole equation and giving up in frustration. Do the easy parts first. Get the answers down that you know are true, and then proceed with procedure. As for me? Nope, never learned how to get the answers myself. But I got an A that year and the teacher let me play on that overhead projector thingie and doodle with the grease pen. I got an A. If y'wanna know what the poem is about? *shrug* It's all in the title. *wink* But I had to write more than THAT. Love to you all. *smoochies* |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I never assume when reading you because I know from the start I would not come to the corect conclusion. But I love the sound of your words and I will say yes to anything you write. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
"like bones in fetal clutch of graves" I love your words, Ser. So good to read you. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Amazing stuff! Best~ Amaryllis |
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