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ethome
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0 posted 2010-10-18 03:18 AM


From the cortex chambers ventriliquists speak
with their distant voices probing
the soul's quiet palace.
They demand necessities: Amen -
and forgiveness; they repair despair,
teaching lessons from straw to sticks to bricks.


Yet what sad reality, the acceptance of
the mediating value of lies,
when the truth was never better.
Why is it some disguise body and mind,
until they are forced into the open
exposed by their glib shallow rote?


While, all the voices in the palace,
ventriloquists of inner thought,
remain quantum reminders,
that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
it comes down to the truth of the matter.

© Copyright 2010 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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1 posted 2010-10-18 04:27 AM


An interesting read, and considering the subject matter (a somewhat grey area, but often brightly-colored in immediate effects) your words are admirably restrained.

I have read somewhere that those NDE interviewees claim somewhat sharper and more facile thought processing in non-biological form.

Whatever the merits of that, us humans certainly are complex mental creatures in this form, at least as seen from within. Ratiocinating, filtering-waking consciousness is obviously just one facet of the deal.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2010-10-18 05:05 AM


doesn't it always

very cool write here and nice to read you again!

ethome
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3 posted 2010-10-19 01:23 PM


Thank you Easy that's a very nice reply
ethome
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4 posted 2010-10-19 01:23 PM


Thanks Passing much appreciated.

Yes, it always does!

Eric

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2010-10-20 08:51 PM


Oh this is very nice....Your thoughts are wise and wonderful.  

Missed reading you here, ethome.

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6 posted 2010-10-20 09:40 PM


While, all the voices in the palace,
ventriloquists of inner thought,
remain quantum reminders,
that from the heart, to the great light that fills the sky,
all accept the gift of consciousness - and in the end,
it comes down to the truth of the matter.

~*~

Ethome, welcome Home!

You've been missed! Greatly!

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2010-10-21 04:09 AM


Nice to see you back, ethome and with such a fascinating and thought provoking write.
                             Ida

Eusta B. Mae
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8 posted 2010-10-21 08:46 AM


loved your topic and perspective! Seeking the truth of the matter always takes you through places fertle for thought. Much enjoyed. ebm
Balladeer
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9 posted 2010-10-21 09:09 AM


There are always strings  attached where dummies are involved, aren't there? Good to read you, sir..
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2010-10-21 07:28 PM


Enjoyed...James
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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11 posted 2010-10-22 05:14 AM


From the cortex chambers ventriliquists speak
with their distant voices probing
the soul's quiet palace.


I do love that bit. This is intresting, kinda makes me want to sit and reflect - to find the truth of certain matters.
A thought-provoking write. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

ethome
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12 posted 2010-10-22 06:31 AM


Thank you Blues
Nice to read your words and enjoyable being back here.

Thank you Karilea
Always loved your wise poetry and kind words.
I appreciate the comments and take care of that lovely soul of yours.

ethome
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13 posted 2010-10-22 06:36 AM


Thank you Ida for the positive input and the willingness to reason on these words.


Thanks Eusta.
Yes, seeking the truth certainly does commit one to fertile places of integrity.
Much appreciated!

Eric


ethome
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14 posted 2010-10-22 06:38 AM


Thanks Michael
Yes, that's a good way to put it. I appreciate the visit.

Hey James
Always good to hear from such a complete romanticist as you. Keep up the good work.


Eric

ethome
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15 posted 2010-10-22 06:41 AM


Hi Trina

I'm glad you appreciated those words. I mean, that's what makes us nonprofessional writers gather here, to appreciate looking at life from many different angles.


Eric

Prasad Nataraj
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16 posted 2010-10-23 12:39 PM


profound thoughts. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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