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Open Poetry #46

Electric Nightfall

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-10-15 06:54 AM

Electric Nightfall

I looked at the steel towers,
At the high-tension wires, and thought,
"Amazing, how much really works
Despite corruption, despite fools."

The clouds formed golden shells at last
Above a setting summer sun,
And soon the streets would fill with glare,
Towered lights beyond compare.

Sometimes this world seems all anew
As beacons rise from crimson skies,
With barely any interruption.
The generators bow and hum.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-10-15 11:26 AM

This is a really cool poem, easy1.
There is so much to like and many good thoughts to ponder.

Very unique and so well done.
Loved it!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2010-10-17 03:10 AM

Fine writing, easy1, Much to think about.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-10-17 04:25 PM

There is fascination in an illuminated city, indeed.

Beautiful and positive.

Margherita

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2010-10-17 07:14 PM

Nicely done ! enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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