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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-10-15 05:48 AM


The Devil was laughing
mocking me
and hell's gate
welcomed me
with arms wide open
just like you did
and I accepted
for lack of stregth

Damn you

you took it all
well what was left of it
My soul
you broke me
and I fell
down-down-down
into despair

Can I crawl back?

I'm exhausted
giving up
maybe this is my limit
and all this time
the Devil has been laughing.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2010-10-15 06:31 AM


never give up T....the devil is just another democrat..cool stuff lady
Cpat Hair
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Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-10-15 07:01 AM


agree, never give up ms T...

you capture the despair of falling well here....

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2010-10-15 07:48 AM


Dark, Cpat. - Thanx for stopping by. Truly I'm flattered.
Slowly but surely - I'm clawing my way back up.

"I may be shattered, but I'm not broken."

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
4 posted 2010-10-16 07:38 AM


I agree with the Dark Stranger`s comment  for the most part except for the part about the devil being a democrat.  He`s really a Republican.
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
5 posted 2010-10-16 09:17 AM


LoL Thanx for that Earl, I got a laugh out of it.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
6 posted 2010-10-16 10:30 PM


Whether rich or poor in worldly ways, a person has to be a little careful about claiming "the Devil made me do it."
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