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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2010-10-13 11:55 PM

I never want to wonder
If I left something unsaid
I never want the last thing
you hear
to be angry words
I have trouble sometimes
with the simple things
   ...a touch
   ...a kiss
   ...a soft word
And I know I lose sight
of whats truly important

You...you are the music
my soul sings
Unheard but by me
You are the first blush of
sun across the water
You are what grounds me
even while letting me fly

I dont always have the words
I dont always show you
But theres never a moment
I dont love you

I just wanted you to know

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-10-14 07:09 AM

Indeed.... what an important thing to let someone know..

enjoyed your romantic words ma'am..

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

2 posted 2010-10-14 07:47 AM

Thank you, Paula. I was beginning to wonder!!

...and you said it so well,

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-10-14 08:03 AM

'Deer... you are beginning to sound more like Toe every day... LOL

Paula, ignore him.... I know your words were meant for someone very special..
which leaves out 'Deer, Toe, and the Sailor we nevr see any more.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2010-10-14 01:51 PM

LMAO...you guys are too silly..and actually there is no one in my life...so more wishful dreaming than anything

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

5 posted 2010-10-14 05:04 PM

good read - many have a temper - best we can do is learn to control it

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

6 posted 2010-10-14 09:20 PM

A fine sentiment. Well said, even if it was for no one in particular. Perhaps, some day. Keep the faith.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

7 posted 2010-10-15 06:04 AM

I love the simplicity in this. Although "I love you" isn't always easy to say, its probably one of the most important phrases throughout the world. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

"To decieve ones self, is truly a grueling battle. One which we're destined to lose."

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2010-10-16 12:43 PM

"You...you are the music
my soul sings"

wishful dreaming or not,
you know romance.
well done.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2010-10-16 01:24 PM

you should write greeting cards! Love this!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2010-10-16 10:08 PM

Lovely sentiments, Paula.
Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2010-10-18 07:17 PM

Nice...James

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2010-10-19 01:25 PM

Very nice Paula!

Good to see you're still around here and still writing lovely romance.

Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2010-10-19 07:43 PM

**Beautiful**

Your poem reads from the heart, and says it all.

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