Night Drift ( Inspired by EBM's Driftwood Series)

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Open Poetry #46

Night Drift ( Inspired by EBM's Driftwood Series)

Cpat Hair

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0 posted 2010-10-12 12:15 PM

Where sand defined sinews of her roots were met
By the swell of grain
He found the curves of her fit his palms

She was a handful
That spilled the scent of damp when it grew cloudy
And he turned on the lights to better see
The way she pleased his fingertips

Her silent assent
Found tenon in mortised tongue
As she remembered sounds of waves
Lapping against the moonlit stone
So whispered
Yes

Knowing hands
Such as his could mould the remaining knots
And that the sheen he polished
On neglected skin
Would hold
Him

Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-10-12 12:38 PM

Oh my! (smiling) It is perfect!

Sunkissed
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2 posted 2010-10-12 12:40 PM

A great addition to Eusta's series. Well done, Captain!

~Sunkissed

Cpat Hair

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3 posted 2010-10-12 12:43 PM

EBM.. you're kind..and generous to let me use your theme...

thank you

Cpat Hair

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4 posted 2010-10-12 12:43 PM

Ms 'Kissed... thank you...

Dark Stranger
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West Coast

5 posted 2010-10-12 01:02 PM

some of a beach dude...fun to watch you two polish limbs in this series

Cpat Hair

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6 posted 2010-10-12 01:18 PM

Thanks DS! Just an offshot thought I had after reading Ms M's series..

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2010-10-12 01:46 PM

The fourth line is delightful...
and as for an offshoot...

well done.

Cpat Hair

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8 posted 2010-10-12 02:22 PM

thanks ma'am.. glad it amused you :-)

bel1e
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9 posted 2010-10-12 06:08 PM

~~oh my~~~is right~~~

~feeling the undercurrents in this~~~deeply

Cpat Hair

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10 posted 2010-10-13 07:02 AM

thought you might....

thanks for the look see ma'am

The Lady
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The Southwest

11 posted 2010-10-14 11:26 PM

well! is that throbbing I hear?

Cpat Hair

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12 posted 2010-10-15 07:15 AM

Well ma'am... I don't think he mashed a finger or thumb,or dropped anything on a toe. Maybe later... since if he is like anything else I have written, he's probably a bit of a clutz...
:-)

thanks for dropping in Ma'am

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