Open Poetry #46 |
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fonding of seaward southern |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I wonder of your eyes when they are perhaps just glancing at the dark colors before dawn when you smile at cocoa sipping suggestions and bring a shiver that shimmers under neon when you turn your back to your own footsteps and linger closer to man made moon light just to cast a whispered glow of woman ways and does your shadow carry perfume like you letting it drift across an imagined sea smile and up over the onto of leather lathered stones like a left over kiss that was just brought along in case there was a place in day dreams remaining and only you could plant in that wanting garden _____________ daark |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
one always has to wonder about the spare kiss that might be brought along... nice read Sir..and as always your touch is deft and the wording uniquely yours. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks amigo..it is a pleasure to receive your reviews |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I always look forward to reading one of your works and am never disappointed. A beauty for sure. ~Sunkissed ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunkiss...thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Awesome, dear D.! One of those poetic expressions that make we want to squeak in pleasure ![]() Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...I would enjoy the sound...of your squeak..thanks ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I wonder too, and remember the shadows drifting lazily. But mostly I remember how riveting those moments were. Love and warm hugs always, D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue..thanks babe...enjoy the sun this weekend..maybe I will see you on the 101.. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I love the line `Does your shadow carry perfume like you`, Where do you get such lines? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
EB...I just hear them from everything that speaks I guess...in my mind's ear everything/everyone has a voice. Thanks guy |
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